Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5038: [doc] Improve Pulsar security-tls-authentication URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5038#discussion_r317530473
########## File path: site2/docs/security-tls-authentication.md ########## @@ -6,15 +6,16 @@ sidebar_label: Authentication using TLS ## TLS Authentication Overview -TLS authentication is an extension of [TLS transport encryption](security-tls-transport.md), but instead of only servers having keys and certs which the client uses to verify the server's identity, clients also have keys and certs which the server uses to verify the client's identity. You must have TLS transport encryption configured on your cluster before you can use TLS authentication. This guide assumes you already have TLS transport encryption configured. +TLS authentication is an extension of [TLS transport encryption](security-tls-transport.md). Not only servers have keys and certs that the client uses to verify the server's identity, clients also have keys and certs that the server uses to verify the client's identity. You must have TLS transport encryption configured on your cluster before you can use TLS authentication. This guide assumes you already have TLS transport encryption configured. -### Creating client certificates +### Creat client certificates -Client certificates are generated using the same certificate authority as was used to generate the server certificates. +You can use the same certificate authority that the server certificates used to generate the server certificates for generating client certificates. Review comment: It's good to use active voice. Try to break it into two sentences, make it easy to read and understand. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
