Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5052: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security-token-admin URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5052#discussion_r319389287
########## File path: site2/docs/security-token-admin.md ########## @@ -6,96 +6,87 @@ sidebar_label: Token authentication admin ## Token Authentication Overview -Pulsar supports authenticating clients using security tokens that are based on -[JSON Web Tokens](https://jwt.io/introduction/) ([RFC-7519](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519)). +Pulsar supports authenticating clients using security tokens that are based on [JSON Web Tokens](https://jwt.io/introduction/) ([RFC-7519](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519)). -Tokens are used to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some "principal" (or "role") which -will be then granted permissions to do some actions (eg: publish or consume from a topic). +You can use tokens to identify a Pulsar client and associate with some "principal" (or "role") that +is permitted to do some actions (for example, publish to a topic or consume from a topic). -A user will typically be given a token string by an administrator (or some automated service). +A user typically gets a user a token string from the administrator (or some automated service). Review comment: check this sentence. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
