Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5052: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Security-token-admin
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5052#discussion_r319391452
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-token-admin.md
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 @@ -105,21 +96,19 @@ $ bin/pulsar tokens create --secret-key 
file:///path/to/my-secret.key \
 
 ## Authorization
 
-The token itself doesn't have any permission associated. That will be 
determined by the
-authorization engine. Once the token is created, one can grant permission for 
this token to do certain
-actions. Eg. :
+The token itself does not have any permission associated. The authorization 
engine determines whether the token should have permissions or not. Once you 
have created the token, one can grant permission for this token to do certain 
actions. For example:
 
 Review comment:
   ```suggestion
   The token does not associate any permission. The authorization engine 
determines whether the token has permissions or not. Once you have created the 
token, you can grant permission for this token to do certain actions. For 
example:
   ```

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