Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #6181: Changes to improve readability URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/6181#discussion_r380674017
########## File path: site2/docs/deploy-bare-metal.md ########## @@ -231,8 +231,7 @@ $ bin/pulsar initialize-cluster-metadata \ --broker-service-url-tls pulsar+ssl://pulsar.us-west.example.com:6651 ``` -As you can see from the example above, you -need to specify the following: +As you can see from the example above, you will need to specify the following: Review comment: ```suggestion As you can see from the example above, you need to specify the following: ``` Use present tense in technical writing ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
