lonerzzz commented on a change in pull request #6181: Changes to improve 
readability
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/6181#discussion_r380928343
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/deploy-bare-metal.md
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 @@ -447,13 +445,13 @@ bin/pulsar-admin functions create \
   --name exclamation
 ```
 
-Check if the function runs as expected by 
[triggering](functions-deploying.md#triggering-pulsar-functions) the function.
+Check whether the function runs as expected by 
[triggering](functions-deploying.md#triggering-pulsar-functions) the function.
 
 ```bash
 bin/pulsar-admin functions trigger --name exclamation --trigger-value "hello 
world"
 ```
 
-You can see the output as below:
+You should see the following output:
 
 Review comment:
   'Can' implies the ability to do something. 'Should' is used to indicate what 
is probable or what is intended. When a person runs the command, they should 
see something, but if something was incorrect they would not. That is the 
intent I was conveying.

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