lonerzzz commented on a change in pull request #6181: Changes to improve readability URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/6181#discussion_r380920902
########## File path: site2/docs/deploy-bare-metal.md ########## @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ Directory | Contains ## [Install Builtin Connectors (optional)]( https://pulsar.apache.org/docs/en/next/standalone/#install-builtin-connectors-optional) -> Since Pulsar releases `2.1.0-incubating`, Pulsar releases a separate binary distribution, containing all the `builtin` connectors. +> Since Pulsar release `2.1.0-incubating`, Pulsar provides a separate binary distribution, containing all the `builtin` connectors. Review comment: The first 'releases' should be a singular noun as it is describing a single release. If that is not the intent, then the '2.1.0-incubating' should have wild cards added to indicate the set of releases. For the second 'releases', I used a different term since using words with the same name and different meanings makes reading the sentence more complex. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
