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ASF GitHub Bot commented on HADOOP-18320:
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mukund-thakur commented on code in PR #4499:
URL: https://github.com/apache/hadoop/pull/4499#discussion_r1062124836


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hadoop-tools/hadoop-aws/src/site/markdown/tools/hadoop-aws/delegation_tokens.md:
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@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ password-protected data opaque to clients; they contain the 
secrets needed
 to access the relevant S3 buckets and associated services.
 
 They are obtained by requesting a delegation token from the S3A filesystem 
client.

Review Comment:
   Not sure why github not allowing me to comment at L82. 
   Delegation "Token" support is 



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hadoop-tools/hadoop-aws/src/site/markdown/tools/hadoop-aws/delegation_tokens.md:
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@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ password-protected data opaque to clients; they contain the 
secrets needed
 to access the relevant S3 buckets and associated services.
 
 They are obtained by requesting a delegation token from the S3A filesystem 
client.

Review Comment:
   l120 : It -> it.



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hadoop-tools/hadoop-aws/src/site/markdown/tools/hadoop-aws/delegation_tokens.md:
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@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ password-protected data opaque to clients; they contain the 
secrets needed
 to access the relevant S3 buckets and associated services.
 
 They are obtained by requesting a delegation token from the S3A filesystem 
client.

Review Comment:
   L106 -> These S3A Delegation Tokens are special in "a way" that 



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hadoop-tools/hadoop-aws/src/site/markdown/tools/hadoop-aws/delegation_tokens.md:
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@@ -353,10 +352,10 @@ it is authenticated with; the role token binding will 
fail.
 
 When the AWS credentials supplied to the Session Delegation Token binding
 through `fs.s3a.aws.credentials.provider` are themselves a set of

Review Comment:
   Something is off here, maybe "they themselves are part of session 
credentials."





> Improve S3A delegations token documentation
> -------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: HADOOP-18320
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HADOOP-18320
>             Project: Hadoop Common
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>            Reporter: Ahmar Suhail
>            Assignee: Ahmar Suhail
>            Priority: Minor
>              Labels: pull-request-available
>          Time Spent: 20m
>  Remaining Estimate: 0h
>
> The current [delegations token 
> documentation|https://github.com/apache/hadoop/blob/trunk/hadoop-tools/hadoop-aws/src/site/markdown/tools/hadoop-aws/delegation_tokens.md]
>  has some typos, this task tracks fixing those. 



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