Hi,

> AFRINIC is calling for comments on a revision to the Registration Service 
> Agreement (RSA). The draft revised RSA may be found at 
> https://www.afrinic.net/images/rsa_afrinic_changes_20170930.pdf
> 
> This revision to the RSA is necessary to allow transfers in accordance with 
> the recently-approved policy AFPUB-2016-V4-003-DRAFT03 “IPv4 Resources 
> transfer within the AFRINIC Region”
> https://www.afrinic.net/en/community/policy-development/policy-proposals/1969-ipv4-resources-transfer-within-the-afrinic-region.
> 
> A few additional changes for clarity and consistency are also incorporated 
> into the draft revised RSA In the document at 
> https://www.afrinic.net/images/rsa_afrinic_changes_20170930.pdf, deletions 
> are marked with strikeout and additions are marked with underline.

Just a quick comment on the wording. The notes say:

> - The new 6(d)(vii) says that a transfer is a kind of allocation or 
> assignment. Because of this, other parts of the RSA that refer to allocations 
> or assignments will automatically cover transfers as well.

That seems fine. However section 1(c)(i) says:

> - “Services” may include, without limitation, an allocation/assignment or 
> transfer of number resources.

Depending on how someone wants to read it, that might be interpreted in a way 
that sets a precedent that says that transfers are not included in 
"allocation/assignment" by default and need to be mentioned explicitly.

I know, I'm picking nits here, but for consistency and to avoid 
misinterpretations I think it would be better to either not mention "or 
transfers" here, or to explicitly include them in other places as well.

Cheers,
Sander

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