Hi Roger,

I am struggling with the wording at:

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* Subsequent modifications to any of process builders in the {@code builders}
1198      * argument will not affect the returned {@link Process}.

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Maybe specified/provided  process builders  

Not sure, will think about it a bit.

Otherwise I think the changes are fine
> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:07 PM, Roger Riggs <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Please review a doc change to improve the description of 
> ProcessBuilder.startPipeline.
> The clarifications are not intended to imply any change in behavior and only 
> focus the description
> on the steps taken for each command in the pipeline.
> (A CSR will be needed also when the wording is finalized).
> 
> Webrev:
>    http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rriggs/webrev-process-8189717/
> Issue:
>    https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717
> 
> Thanks, Roger
> 

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