Hi Roger,
> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:48 PM, Roger Riggs <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Hi Lance,
>
> How about:
> Subsequent modifications to any of {@code builder}s will not affect
> the returned {@link Process}.
….. to any of the specified builders ….
At a minimum, you need ‘the’ added to the above
> Roger
>
>
> On 7/13/2018 3:26 PM, Lance Andersen wrote:
>> Hi Roger,
>>
>> I am struggling with the wording at:
>>
>> ———
>> * Subsequent modifications to any of process builders in the {@code builders}
>> 1198 * argument will not affect the returned {@link Process}.
>>
>> ————
>>
>> Maybe specified/provided process builders
>>
>> Not sure, will think about it a bit.
>>
>> Otherwise I think the changes are fine
>>> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:07 PM, Roger Riggs <[email protected]
>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>
>>> Please review a doc change to improve the description of
>>> ProcessBuilder.startPipeline.
>>> The clarifications are not intended to imply any change in behavior and
>>> only focus the description
>>> on the steps taken for each command in the pipeline.
>>> (A CSR will be needed also when the wording is finalized).
>>>
>>> Webrev:
>>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rriggs/webrev-process-8189717/
>>> <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Erriggs/webrev-process-8189717/>
>>> Issue:
>>> https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717
>>> <https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717>
>>>
>>> Thanks, Roger
>>>
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