Hi Lance,

How about:

Subsequent modifications to any of {@code builder}swill not affect the returned {@link Process}.

Roger


On 7/13/2018 3:26 PM, Lance Andersen wrote:
Hi Roger,

I am struggling with the wording at:

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* Subsequent modifications to any of process builders in the {@code builders}
1198 * argument will not affect the returned {@link Process}.

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Maybe specified/provided  process builders

Not sure, will think about it a bit.

Otherwise I think the changes are fine
On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:07 PM, Roger Riggs <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

Please review a doc change to improve the description of ProcessBuilder.startPipeline. The clarifications are not intended to imply any change in behavior and only focus the description
on the steps taken for each command in the pipeline.
(A CSR will be needed also when the wording is finalized).

Webrev:
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rriggs/webrev-process-8189717/ <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Erriggs/webrev-process-8189717/>
Issue:
https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717

Thanks, Roger


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