> one or two were dropped/misplaced. here’s one. > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor struggles through mud and > thorns to reach well-respected psionic weaponry corp > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor (gasping, urgent, bleeding, > wheezing, dripping mud): “i have to speak to traffic boss.” > > rebel worker 2 takes mcgas to the hyperprison and opens the door > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor (to rebel worker 2): “thank > you so, so much” > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor enters the hyperprison > through the door > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor: “traffick boss!” > > (some disruption writing :s slow to write, could be seen as bearing > controversy) > > traffick boss looks up from a tic-tac-toe board with a cigar on it, to > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor, who approaches > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor gets on his knees before the > cigar on the tictactoe board and traffick boss, and puts one hand inside > the other in an intensely beseeching pose. > > mcgas is covered in wounds with ripped clothes from thornbushes. shards of > broken glass are seen here or there near their feet. > > mcgas: “traffick boss, i am so sorry i ratted on you.” > > traffick boss looks at mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor. a > small pause. > > mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor: “i am so sorry that i spent > time in my life not seeing your atrocities as blessed gifts to the world” > > traffick boss looks at mind-controlled grassroots activist survivor for > another small pause. > > mind-controlled gr— > 1716 >
some thoughts on doing a different take where the mind control victim with prolonged distance instead goes to rebel worker 2. to spinoffs to think instead >
