On 1/20/2010 17:11, Eric Kow wrote:
On Wed, Jan 20, 2010 at 22:00:32 +0000, Ganesh Sittampalam wrote:
I don't think I'm the best person to decide on whether the text is clear. (It is
to me, for what it's worth.)

Mark, Isaac [and ideally, a user who hasn't already chimed in]?

I can fill the role of someone that hasn't paid much attention to the debate beforehand.

For the most part it looks reasonable, and the following are merely nitpicks.

I think Petr is right that perhaps the bars should be center aligned given the almost-center alignment already in place. (Although for center alignment I'd prefer that the text take up roughly as much space; maybe add a THE END next to (edit above) or something similar.)

I repeat the text for convenience.

Interactive hunk edit:
  - This edit will not affect your working copy
  - To split a block of added text, remove the part you want to postpone

Given the Before/After distinction (which I think I like), perhaps this would be slightly less confusing if it were "after text" rather than "added text".

  - To split a block of removed text, copy back the part you want to retain

I don't think that "removed text" is as confusing as "added text", but I'm not sure why that is to me. It could probably likewise be "before text", but then I think "copy back" becomes confusing...

  - Arbitrary editing is supported

Certainly it won't be "arbitrary" to the person actually doing it. Maybe "additional" is a better word choice? "Advanced"?

======================== BEFORE (for reference) ========================
rambling robot
red rover
======================== AFTER (edit below) ============================
alliterative alligator
amusing amoeba
anecdotal antelope
======================== (edit above) ==================================

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