ok, i've reworked the banner, trying to consider all your suggestions, but i didn't understand what's wrong with the spacing (point one in the guidelines)
if you have futher suggestions, just tell me ;) Am Samstag, den 26.02.2011, 23:22 +0100 schrieb Bernhard Dippold: > Hi Tobias, all > > Tobias Bernard schrieb: > > hi > > > > i don't know if we have enough fundraising banners yet, > > Of course not! > > But we need more different formats (as mentioned on the wiki page). > > > but here's one > > more;) > > Thank you for your work! > > > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:Libo-challengecontinues-banner-by-tobias.png > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:Libo-banner-challenge-continues.svg > > I like the general impression and the color language of green and grey - > this perfectly fits to our branding in a way that doesn't mimic our website. > > But there are some points I have to comment: > > As the banner should be used on external sites, we should remove the > subline "The Document Foundation" form the logo. This subline should be > reserved for our product and community, the websites > www.documentfoundation.org and www.libreoffice.org and officially > announced spokespeople. > > The word cloud is a great idea - I like it very much. But as the size of > the words differ not very much, it is hard to get any information from > that part. You have to follow the line of words - a bit tricky for the > average visitor of a website. The green words stand out quite well, but > "Help" and "Office" wont tell them not very much. > > Perhaps we could try to reduce the size of some words and emphasize > "create" (and "best", perhaps "office suite" too) by relative size and / > or color. > > With regards to the symbol I'd ask you to have a look at the branding > guidelines: > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Marketing/Branding#Guidelines_and_Best_Practices > > (especially the first and fifth entry about whitespace and elements > inside the symbol). > > But as I already mentioned: The general impression is great. It might > become the basis for a long-term banner to be used by marketing and web > representation. > > Best regards > > Bernhard > > > > greetings > > tobias > > > > ps: why does the the svg file have such an ugly preview? > > > > > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
