I appreciate your patience and continued feedback as we work together to 
get this all correct and usable. 

https://wiki.mozilla.org/CA/Root_Inclusion_Considerations

I have incorporated recent feedback as follows. 

- Changed “network surveillance…” to:
network surveillance 
<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Computer_and_network_surveillance#Network_surveillance>
 
that intercepts/manipulates traffic or collects private information about a 
person or organization and sends it to another entity without the 
permission of the person or organization, or in a way that endangers the 
privacy or device security of the person or organization

- Changed “cyber espionage …” to:
cyber espionage <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cyber_spying> that aims to 
obtain private information from a person or organization without the 
knowledge or permission of the person or organization for personal, 
economic, political or military advantage.

- Changed “Deliberately violated Mozilla's Root Store Policy …” to:
Deliberately violated the version of Mozilla's Root Store Policy or other 
applicable policy that was in effect at the time that the violation occurred

- Under “The CA operator appears to have:” added:
Made intentionally deceptive or recklessly misleading claims relating to 
operation of the CA or the use of its certificates

- Changed “The CA's representatives are not fully transparent on matters 
such as legal domicile and ownership.” to:
The CA's representatives are not fully transparent on matters such as legal 
domicile and Control.
-- "Control" (and its correlative meanings, "controlled by" and "under 
common control with") means possession, directly or indirectly, of the 
power to: (1) direct the management, personnel, finances, or plans of such 
entity; (2) control the election of a majority of the directors ; or (3) 
vote that portion of voting shares required for "control" under the law of 
the entity's Jurisdiction of Incorporation or Registration but in no case 
less than 10%.

- Changed “Fails to provide prompt and detailed responses to Mozilla 
inquiries…” to:
Fails to provide prompt, detailed, public, and transparent responses to 
Mozilla inquiries about their CA operations, root inclusion requests, 
policy documents, audit statements, and incidents.

- Changed “Has non-contiguous audit periods” to:
Has non-contiguous audit periods; meaning that there is one day or more 
between consecutive audit periods.

Thanks,
Kathleen

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