Steve-- Great to have some "professional" edits to the documentation. :)
A few comments on some of the changes made here which we might take a closer look at: 1) I think your editor is tab-ifying some of the documentation. We're standardized on using four spaces rather than tabs for the doc. This happened at least in xdocs/netui/overview.xml 2) unless there is formatting (like <strong>) that is used inside of JSP content, it's much easier to write documentation using "<" characters than <. This makes copy/paste from samples simpler 3) when referring to NetUI, we tend to use the term "NetUI" rather than "Netui". This happened in the labels in site.xml. Also, in this case, it seems like we can call the NetUI Overview section just "Overview" since it's under the NetUI tab already. I've tried to remove some of that reduncancy from the docs in recent weeks. Thoughts? Eddie On 8/31/05, [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Author: steveh > Date: Wed Aug 31 16:09:14 2005 > New Revision: 265602 > > URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=265602&view=rev > Log: > Editing run-through. > > Modified: > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/controls/tutorial_controls.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/getting_started.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/jspOverview.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/overview.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/pageFlowControllers.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/projects.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/site.xml > beehive/trunk/docs/how_to_contribute_docs.txt > > Modified: > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/controls/tutorial_controls.xml
