Fine with me (+0). I was an original proponent of non-conflicting names (*not* long names based on the hierarchy FTR), but this is OK. I'm an ace at ed/sed for times where we change the structure. :) I've edited the doc at http://wiki.apache.org/beehive/DocConventions .
Rich

Eddie O'Neil wrote:

 +1 from me.  :)

 I might take a crack at fixing this before we branch, but it would
be *just* before the branch.  Just so it's taken care of in both a 1.0
branch and trunk/.  It's really an implementation detail (doesn't
surface in the URLs on the public site), so it's not a big deal either
way.

Eddie



On 9/1/05, Daryl Olander <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
I agree with Eddie on the "navigate the document top-down" philosophy. I've
confirmed that XPath does work correctly. So today, we have "site:datagrid"
and this should become"site:NetUI/tags/datagrid ". (I renamed the
pageflow_tags element to tags in this example. This "site:" example was
found in the tagOverview.xml).

Having said this, I think this should be a long run goal and that we don't
change the site.xml and matching "site:xxx" hrefs until post 1.0. I'm going
to check in the one sample from above as proof that it works, but the rest
of the clean should wait.

Thoughts?


On 8/31/05, Eddie O'Neil <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
I prefer using site.xml to navigate the document top-down instead of
using unique names for each element. At some point, those unique
names become hard to maintain unless they're fully-qualified names
which is basically the XPath to the element through site.xml. So I
prefer this:

<netui>
<databinding>

refernced with "site:netui/databinding" to this:

<netui>
<netui_databinding>

which can be referred to as "site:netui_databinding".

But, I'm not religious about this -- just don't like having to repeat
"netui" twice in the config file's structure and names.

For line numbers, I'd prefer 120 but could live with 100. 80 is
just way too 1980's. :)

To Steve's questions, "PageFlow" seems right, though that is part of
NetUI which includes Page Flow, the JSP tags, and other technologies
that are surely yet to come. The use of "controller class" vs.
"Controller class" seems like a it depends on context. But, I don't
have strong feelings here either.

My $0.02...

Eddie




On 8/31/05, Steve Hanson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
As for the tabification, I hit Ctrl+F in Eclipse at one point by
accident,
that is probably the culprit. I will check the indent style on my
Eclipse
editor.

I have endeavored to avoid &lt; wherever I can -- but I see no way to
avoid
it when you want to display angle brackets in bold font.

I have some questions of my own:
Should it be "Page Flow" or "Page Flow"? I am neutral on this question.
Should it be "Controller class" or "controller class"? I have a slight
preference for "Controller class", since it suggests a reference to a
Java
class.

On 8/31/05, Eddie O'Neil <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Steve--

Great to have some "professional" edits to the documentation. :)

A few comments on some of the changes made here which we might take
a closer look at:

1) I think your editor is tab-ifying some of the documentation. We're
standardized on using four spaces rather than tabs for the doc. This
happened at least in xdocs/netui/overview.xml

2) unless there is formatting (like <strong>) that is used inside of
JSP content, it's much easier to write documentation using "<"
characters than &lt;. This makes copy/paste from samples simpler

3) when referring to NetUI, we tend to use the term "NetUI" rather
than "Netui". This happened in the labels in site.xml. Also, in this
case, it seems like we can call the NetUI Overview section just
"Overview" since it's under the NetUI tab already. I've tried to
remove some of that reduncancy from the docs in recent weeks.

Thoughts?

Eddie

On 8/31/05, [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Author: steveh
Date: Wed Aug 31 16:09:14 2005
New Revision: 265602

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=265602&view=rev
Log:
Editing run-through.

Modified:

beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/controls/tutorial_controls.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/getting_started.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/jspOverview.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/overview.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/pageFlowControllers.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/projects.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/site.xml
beehive/trunk/docs/how_to_contribute_docs.txt

Modified:
beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/controls/tutorial_controls.xml

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