As for the tabification, I hit Ctrl+F in Eclipse at one point by accident, that is probably the culprit. I will check the indent style on my Eclipse editor.
I have endeavored to avoid < wherever I can -- but I see no way to avoid it when you want to display angle brackets in bold font. I have some questions of my own: Should it be "Page Flow" or "Page Flow"? I am neutral on this question. Should it be "Controller class" or "controller class"? I have a slight preference for "Controller class", since it suggests a reference to a Java class. On 8/31/05, Eddie O'Neil <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Steve-- > > Great to have some "professional" edits to the documentation. :) > > A few comments on some of the changes made here which we might take > a closer look at: > > 1) I think your editor is tab-ifying some of the documentation. We're > standardized on using four spaces rather than tabs for the doc. This > happened at least in xdocs/netui/overview.xml > > 2) unless there is formatting (like <strong>) that is used inside of > JSP content, it's much easier to write documentation using "<" > characters than <. This makes copy/paste from samples simpler > > 3) when referring to NetUI, we tend to use the term "NetUI" rather > than "Netui". This happened in the labels in site.xml. Also, in this > case, it seems like we can call the NetUI Overview section just > "Overview" since it's under the NetUI tab already. I've tried to > remove some of that reduncancy from the docs in recent weeks. > > Thoughts? > > Eddie > > On 8/31/05, [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Author: steveh > > Date: Wed Aug 31 16:09:14 2005 > > New Revision: 265602 > > > > URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=265602&view=rev > > Log: > > Editing run-through. > > > > Modified: > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/controls/tutorial_controls.xml > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/getting_started.xml > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/jspOverview.xml > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/overview.xml > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/pageFlowControllers.xml > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/netui/projects.xml > > > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/site.xml > > beehive/trunk/docs/how_to_contribute_docs.txt > > > > Modified: > beehive/trunk/docs/forrest/release/src/documentation/content/xdocs/controls/tutorial_controls.xml >
