Note that I could still use some help with this.  The longer it takes for me to 
get these doc fixes into a pull request, the more merge problems we’ll have 
(unless doc changes aren’t happening very often).

To summarize, I have all of these changes not yet checked in, on my “docfixes” 
branch.  I obviously have to check in the changes to my branch.  I assume I do 
NOT have to push those changes to github at this point. When I look at the 
“rebase” option in the Egit Eclipse plugin, there are top-level choices of 
“Local” and “Remote Tracking”.  In the “Local” list is my “docfixes” branch, 
along with “master”.  The “Remote Tracking” list has many “origin/...” 
branches, but one of the ones in the list is “origin/master”.  I imagine I have 
to select either the “Local master” or the “origin/master”, but I’m not sure 
which.

At that point I believe that I will have a set of changes that I should push to 
my github repo, and then I can create a PR from that.

From: KARR, DAVID
Sent: Friday, July 25, 2014 10:53 AM
To: dev@gradle.codehaus.org
Subject: RE: [gradle-dev] Question about phrase in userguide doc


From: Daz DeBoer [mailto:darrell.deb...@gradleware.com]
Sent: Friday, July 25, 2014 10:34 AM
To: dev@gradle.codehaus.org<mailto:dev@gradle.codehaus.org>
Subject: Re: [gradle-dev] Question about phrase in userguide doc

On Thu, Jul 24, 2014 at 5:36 PM, KARR, DAVID 
<dk0...@att.com<mailto:dk0...@att.com>> wrote:
I finally finished the complete proofreading run through of the user guide.  
This is a summary of what I fixed:


•         Minor typos, wordos, and small display problems in almost every 
chapter.

•         Too long lines in many code samples.

•         Some incorrect double quotes (changed from the plain one to the left 
and right quotes).

•         There were only a few places that I changed real content, either 
adding more explicit statements or rewording phrases.

•         Because of formatting problems with things like “literal” (not 
respecting display line length) I ended up rephrasing many statements, 
hopefully more clearly, but towards the goal of repositioning the “literal” 
strings so they didn’t wrap off the end of the line. I gave up on many of these 
if I found it would be too much reformatting to get a good result.

You might have noticed the several questions I posted on the forum, those were 
the real content-related issues.

The question is, what should I do now?  Normally I would just check all of this 
in and submit a pull request.  I just did a count, and there are 130 files 
modified.  Is that going to be a problem?

Yes, a pull request is the correct way to provide these changes. Please ensure 
that you rebase against the latest version before submitting.

Ok.  As I haven’t yet been GSL (Git as a second language) certified, I could 
use more explicit steps.

Should I first commit the changes to my local repo and then push upstream 
(still on my branch)?

I’m currently working on my “docfixes” branch.  Would I rebase it to the 
“master” branch?

I would assume I would then build the doc and view the result for any obvious 
issues.  I can run the “integTest”, but as that’s currently failing for unknown 
reasons (another thread talking about this), I can really only verify that it’s 
failing in apparently the same way it was before.

From: Szczepan Faber 
[mailto:szczepan.fa...@gradleware.com<mailto:szczepan.fa...@gradleware.com>]
Sent: Thursday, July 03, 2014 3:14 PM
To: dev@gradle.codehaus.org<mailto:dev@gradle.codehaus.org>

Subject: Re: [gradle-dev] Question about phrase in userguide doc

I think only 3 words are really important in this sentence: "groovy", 
"productivity" and "fun".

Hope that helps :)

Thanks for helping out with the user guide!

On Thu, Jul 3, 2014 at 11:52 PM, KARR, DAVID 
<dk0...@att.com<mailto:dk0...@att.com>> wrote:
I'm planning on reading and proofreading the user guide, and submitting the 
changes in a PR.  I've found a few typos and wordos in just the first few 
pages.  Usually, I find it obvious what the person meant, and can suggest a 
better wording.  However, sometimes I just can't parse what they were trying to 
say.  I found one of those ungrokable statements in the "overview" section, 
which says:

        "Only by that using Groovy is the fun and productivity gain it can be."

If I'm reading the history correctly, it looks like Hans wrote this more than 4 
years ago.  If Hans isn't around, can someone interpret what he was trying to 
say here?

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