Hi Yo,
sorry for not replying earlier...
Graham schrieb:
Hi All,
Many thanks to all for the assistance with this. I've uploaded the
latest edit as usual at:
http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo2prodflyera4en_update.odt
Just a few remarks:
- What do you think of modifying the color of the sidebar to OOo blue?
- On the first page the OOo logo inside the sidebar looks not really
good because of the two blue tones - I don't think it needs to be there
at all.
- The last heading on the first page (below the green license part)
might be positioned a bit further down to to have more space above it
than below. (And I'd prefer "available here:" over "available now", but
that's just my personal feeling).
- Mac specifications should contain minimal hardware necessities (did
anybody here subscribe to [EMAIL PROTECTED] - I didn't find these
informations on the porting pages.)
- Are we allowed to use the Windows, Solaris and Java logos (I didn't
take the time to search for licenses)?
- Page two: The frames around the images aren't positioned right IMHO:
The Impress frame is too low and allows a line of text to start above
it, this causes the Writer heading to stay beside the images.
For Calc and Writer there are different distances (sometime none)
between frame and image (if you want me to, I'll upload a screenshot). I
assume that this might be caused by the fact that I don't possess the
font Bitstream Charter (used for the text besides the the images).
Perhaps it would be a solution to anchor the images to the frames with
fixed relative positions.
- Page three: Now there are no frames around the screenshots - do you
know why?
- green area at the bottom: The italic typeface of "Writer" causes the
question mark to be too near to the word. What do you think of adding
another <blank>?
Perhaps I overlooked one (IMHO) important information:
Ease of switching form MS Office to OOo (including the possibility to
store documents in MS Office format for compatibility reasons).
This Edit has a new banner. There are three options for the banner all
print well in B&W... or at least they do on my Lexmark laser.
I'm scratching my head as to which is best. I'm happy with either.
ooo_banner3.png is the one that is in the present edit.
http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo_banner.png
http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo_banner2.png
http://ooogear.co.nz/pub/ooo_banner3.png
Any preferences?
I get on all of them Error 404:
The requested URL /pub/ooo_banner3[..].png was not found on this server.
Thanks for your engaged work - even if I'm nitpicking it is really good!
Best regards
Bernhard
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