Hei, besides the fixes mentioned in my last mail i just migrated the wiki content into the market pages of the why.ooo page draft [1].
It's good we have some real sentences now, though i have a strong feeling that a lot of them need elaboration still and i still don't feel that there is a real bow drawn from the targets needs to what we have to offer. Plus too much repetition as well. And those headings need to be improved in many cases. Don't get me wrong, it's good we got that far already, this is a much better basis for improvement than what we had half a year ago. So i'm pleased i could finally fill up those pages with a bit of content. Note that the layout needs further improvement, which i will do when i'm sure about the number of key benefits on each page. 3 is a good number in my opinion, but maybe we need one more here or there. And those collabnet contents in the background of the page that shine through at the bottom if the window is large enough will go away soon, as well. Also, is the library market ultimately gone? Means i'd have to recalculate those icon positions and it was my favourite icon. ;-) André. [1] http://marketing.openoffice.org/tryouts/Why.OpenOffice.org
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