On Tuesday, Jan 08, John McCreesh <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
viktor wrote:
About 'your next office upgrade', it eliminates individual home user. It
is directed towards business, and yes some people do have offices at
home but most dont, especially students. I believe we need to replace
'office' with more broader term maybe: productivity, suite, workflow,
etc.
I have the same problem with "Open. For business".
Well, going back to the discussion from a few weeks ago, the word
"productivity" got kicked around a bit. "Your next productivity upgrade"
actually has a nice ring to it. Or maybe drop the "next" and simply say
"Your productivity upgrade"
Then again, "Your next office upgrade" still makes a certain sense to me.
After all, people have arrived at the site to check out a product called
OpenOffice.org. It seems a bit silly to back away from the "office" aspect
at that point. But I could be wrong -- and probably am! :)
Paul
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