Matt,

Looks good here.  I think clean and simple is the right direction and this
is just another step in that evolution. I think it is a matter of
nit-picking at this point so the following comments come with that scope of
importance.

I would like to see the logo make it somewhere on the page consistently for
the sake of keeping it across all pages in the site.  I realize the logo in
the navbar is rather redundant for the home page, but on all the other
pages such as documentation and general project information, there will be
no presence in the current state.  One way to compromise might be to make
use of the commonplace technique where the logo on the main content area
gets placed into the navbar when scrolling would obscure the logo; all
other pages would then just have it in the header.

Maybe a slightly heavier weight on the navbar for the menu items.

On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 22:51 Matt Gilman <[email protected]> wrote:

> Aldrin,
>
> I like what you did here and it sounds like most people do too. I wanted to
> provide some feedback and minor suggestions but thought it would just be
> easier to mock it up myself rather than trying to ask you to move this here
> and that there. Anyways, take a peek and lets continue iterating. I think
> we're on the right track.
>
> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/mcgilman/apache-nifi-site/
> screenshots/index.html.lite.v1.2.png
>
> Matt
>
> On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 10:05 PM, Joe Witt <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> > Dan,
> >
> > No real thought behind it.  But I personally agree with your statement:
> >
> > the logos look good as "nifi" and the text looks good as "NiFi"
> >
> > Thanks
> > Joe
> >
> > On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 10:03 PM, Daniel Bress <[email protected]>
> > wrote:
> >
> > > Aldrin,
> > >    I think this looks good.
> > >
> > > All,
> > >    Maybe this is a little off topic, but I noticed that the logos
> > > consistently use "nifi" whereas in text its consistently written as
> > > "NiFi".  Any reason for the difference?
> > >
> > >    I kind of thing the logos look good as "nifi" and the text looks
> good
> > > as "NiFi" so I might be questioning something that I am OK with.  But I
> > > noticed they are different and was wondering if this was a conscious
> > > decision or not.  Thoughts?
> > >
> > > Dan Bress
> > > Software Engineer
> > > ONYX Consulting Services
> > >
> > > ________________________________________
> > > From: Joe Witt <[email protected]>
> > > Sent: Tuesday, January 20, 2015 6:40 PM
> > > To: [email protected]
> > > Subject: Re: Website Theme
> > >
> > > Solid design and agree with all your comments aldrin.   Very nice
> > > On Jan 20, 2015 6:27 PM, "Aldrin Piri" <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Mark,
> > > >
> > > > Thanks for the comments.
> > > >
> > > > I actuality tried it without the logo on the main page and it felt a
> > > > bit empty.  I don't know that we necessarily need the logo there, but
> > > > something is needed.  Additionally, I viewed it as being just a
> "front
> > > > page" inclusion, as other pages would just have the top navbar.
> > > >
> > > > You caught me.  I was lazy and I recycled the screenshot from the
> > > > first iteration.  It would definitely need updating, but is largely
> > > > just a placeholder for the concept.  I would definitely like
> something
> > > > a bit more engaging.  (faux edit) I rearranged things a bit, removing
> > > > the second instance of the logo and placing more emphasis on the one
> > > > in the corner of the application.  Not sure if I like it better, but
> > > > I've provided the results [1] with all three of the submissions shown
> > > > in chronological order [2].
> > > >
> > > > The news section is a toss-up for me at this juncture.  I could see
> > > > the need one for eventually, but I'm not sure if the project is quite
> > > > there yet.  It seemed a common thread among incubating sites that
> such
> > > > a section was omitted whereas those top-level projects typically
> > > > included one.  Given that the project is on the verge on the first of
> > > > the regular releases, perhaps this is increasingly pertinent in the
> > > > near future.  At minimum, one of the screen grabs from your blog
> posts
> > > > would be a good candidate.
> > > >
> > > > [1]
> > > >
> > >
> > https://raw.githubusercontent.com/apiri/apache-nifi-site/scr
> eenshots/index.html.lite.v1.1.png
> > > > [2]
> > https://github.com/apiri/apache-nifi-site/blob/screenshots/README.md
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > On Tue, Jan 20, 2015 at 10:19 AM, Mark Payne <[email protected]>
> > > wrote:
> > > > > Aldrin,
> > > > > I'm liking it! Definitely looks nice. Though I would provide a bit
> of
> > > > feedback:
> > > > > I'm not sure that I would include the NiFi logo on the right-hand
> > side,
> > > > since it's already in the top-left.
> > > > > From a NiFi 'brand' perspective, I would update the screenshot a
> bit.
> > > > This screenshot is using the old logo in the top-left corner, and the
> > > graph
> > > > shows all of the data disappearing before the RouteOnAttribute
> > Processor.
> > > > I'd recommend we construct a dataflow that's more appealing to the
> > target
> > > > audience, perhaps integrating with other Apache projects (HDFS, Kafka
> > are
> > > > possible, for instance) or using (S)FTP processor.
> > > > > Does it make sense to have maybe like a 'Latest News' section or
> > > > something where we could post things like "Version 0.0.1 just
> > released!"
> > > > etc.?
> > > > > I'm really liking the concept - nice job!
> > > > > Thanks-Mark
> > > > >
> > > > >> Date: Tue, 20 Jan 2015 07:00:52 -0800
> > > > >> Subject: Re: Website Theme
> > > > >> From: [email protected]
> > > > >> To: [email protected]
> > > > >>
> > > > >> I like it.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> On Mon, Jan 19, 2015 at 8:50 PM, Aldrin Piri <
> [email protected]>
> > > > wrote:
> > > > >>
> > > > >> > I found some time today to provide another look for the site.
> > There
> > > > >> > were very minor changes to the core HTML as is currently served
> at
> > > > >> > nidi homepage and it is largely just a stylesheet.  This one is
> > > highly
> > > > >> > minimal and clean, still driven by Bootstrap and directly makes
> > use
> > > of
> > > > >> > the colors from the UI itself.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > A screenshot can be seen at
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> >
> > > >
> > >
> > https://raw.githubusercontent.com/apiri/apache-nifi-site/scr
> eenshots/index.html.lite.png
> > > > >> > with the associated code under the "lite" branch at
> > > > >> > https://github.com/apiri/apache-nifi-site/tree/lite
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > Any thoughts are appreciated.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > On Tue, Jan 6, 2015 at 9:54 PM, Aldrin Piri <
> [email protected]
> > >
> > > > wrote:
> > > > >> > > Sorry if this somehow gets sent twice.   My first submission
> > > seemed
> > > > to
> > > > >> > > bounce as it exceeded the spam threshold when I sent it a
> couple
> > > of
> > > > >> > > hours ago and it has yet to appear, so I'm sending again.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > First and foremost, good feedback.  I think UI/UX stuff is
> > tricky
> > > > and
> > > > >> > > I am happy to find my livelihood in the plumbing and behind
> the
> > > > scenes
> > > > >> > > work.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > Here's my attempt to try and tackle all the comments in one
> fell
> > > > swoop:
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > I agree that Bootstrap is everywhere, but I don't necessarily
> > > think
> > > > >> > > that is a bad thing.  One could argue that interfaces of all
> > forms
> > > > are
> > > > >> > > converging and users have the instant familiarity of a known
> > > > quantity.
> > > > >> > > I know that I am totally unaware of what it takes to make a
> site
> > > > both
> > > > >> > > functional and maintain its feel across devices.  I think that
> > > last
> > > > >> > > part is important.  Personally, as a user on the other side of
> > the
> > > > >> > > screen, I don't really understand why sites do not work or
> jive
> > > with
> > > > >> > > my mobile device du jour these days; it should just work.
> With
> > > what
> > > > >> > > little I've learned about UX and "Not Making [Anyone]
> > Think,"[1] I
> > > > >> > > want an effortless experience; no pinch zooming, tap panning,
> > etc.
> > > > If
> > > > >> > > there is a way to take bits and pieces of bootstrap to this
> end
> > to
> > > > >> > > support that aspect without the cookie cutter air, I would be
> > > quite
> > > > >> > > thankful for some guidance on that front and do my best to
> > provide
> > > > it.
> > > > >> > > Out of the box though, the sample looked pretty decent across
> > all
> > > > the
> > > > >> > > devices to which I had access, and used constructs everyone
> who
> > > > views
> > > > >> > > content through a tiny screen is accustomed.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > I do agree on the front of the possibility of brand dilution,
> > and
> > > I
> > > > >> > > think it is an excellent point for consideration.  As
> mentioned
> > in
> > > > my
> > > > >> > > original mailing, consideration was given to integrating the
> > > > >> > > application's aesthetics into the core site.  Not sure if this
> > > will
> > > > >> > > pan out in an appreciable way as I can see it in my mind, but
> I
> > do
> > > > >> > > feel it is an avenue worth exploring.  It may also completely
> > miss
> > > > the
> > > > >> > > mark, but with my new found web dev prowess, it should be a
> much
> > > > >> > > quicker iteration than the first draft.  You'll see a slight
> > > homage
> > > > to
> > > > >> > > this via the graph wallpaper that is featured in the
> application
> > > > >> > > itself.  This was muted a bit by a CSS overlay to a level that
> > > > seemed
> > > > >> > > okay, but I definitely hedged as to whether or not to include
> > it.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > Ultimately, I wanted to get something out to start the ball
> > > rolling,
> > > > >> > > establishing a base for successive iterations.  I know that
> with
> > > all
> > > > >> > > the hard work everyone is putting in, the project is closely
> > > > reaching
> > > > >> > > its first milestone for release, and thought it important to
> > chip
> > > in
> > > > >> > > where possible to give a face to the project.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > Additionally, I think this particular project needs pictures
> to
> > > > >> > > demonstrate what it's capabilities.  One of the facets that
> > makes
> > > > me a
> > > > >> > > believer about NiFi as a whole is that the end user is not
> just
> > > > >> > > developers.  Citing the previous example of Accumulo, its
> > intended
> > > > >> > > audience is very technical in nature and, accordingly, a lot
> can
> > > be
> > > > >> > > expressed via the simple phrase of "key-value store."  I would
> > > > contend
> > > > >> > > that NiFi's reach is far broader and can't be done justice
> with
> > a
> > > > >> > > simple phrase.  For the casual potential user who has strung
> > > > together
> > > > >> > > n-many processes of taking a file, manually transforming it,
> and
> > > > >> > > moving it elsewhere, they need to see at quick glance that
> there
> > > is
> > > > >> > > something that can automate this tedium and make them more
> > > > effective.
> > > > >> > > Succinctly, the value proposition needs to be there not only
> for
> > > the
> > > > >> > > technical folks who will use this as a framework, but
> > additionally
> > > > for
> > > > >> > > end users.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > The background for the header isn't awesome, but I knew I
> wasn't
> > > > >> > > violating any licenses if I generated it myself.  I viewed it
> > more
> > > > as
> > > > >> > > a placeholder than anything else.  Definitely not a front end
> > web
> > > > >> > > developer, even more definitively not a graphic artist.  The
> > > colors
> > > > >> > > came from starting with the logo dark blue and running a whole
> > > bunch
> > > > >> > > of filters and plugins via GIMP to get something.
> Additionally,
> > > > there
> > > > >> > > is a CSS gradient applied over top of it as well when it
> seemed
> > a
> > > > bit
> > > > >> > > too loud.  It could definitely deal with being muted a bit
> more.
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > [1] http://www.sensible.com/dmmt.html
> > > > >> > >
> > > > >> > > On Tue, Jan 6, 2015 at 12:57 PM, Tony Kurc <[email protected]>
> > > > wrote:
> > > > >> > >> Hey! It looks awesome! The existing site was put together a
> > > > placeholder
> > > > >> > and
> > > > >> > >> we went with a very generic layout that worked well with
> Apache
> > > > CMS and
> > > > >> > >> contained all the information expected of an apache process.
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >> This is a big improvement! For people new to the project, it
> > > gives
> > > > a
> > > > >> > nice
> > > > >> > >> upfront screenshot, with big fat links for things I care
> about
> > > > people
> > > > >> > >> seeing!
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >> Some things I didn't like about the existing site are the
> > > glyphicon
> > > > >> > links
> > > > >> > >> to "external" sites on the menu. I used "link", but I think
> it
> > > was
> > > > >> > meant to
> > > > >> > >> be used for "permalink". Also, we kind of took a best guess
> > about
> > > > what
> > > > >> > >> should go in each dropdown in the menu. I'm pretty sure it
> > could
> > > be
> > > > >> > better
> > > > >> > >> organized. I'd also like to see the awesome guides that
> people
> > > > wrote
> > > > >> > have a
> > > > >> > >> consistent theme with the website and maybe have pdfs so
> > > old-school
> > > > >> > folks
> > > > >> > >> can print them out (which may be a dumb idea ;) ) A pet peeve
> > of
> > > > mine of
> > > > >> > >> projects is having a hard time finding the documentation I
> > need,
> > > > like
> > > > >> > >> javadocs or specifications - and keeping around the older
> > > versions
> > > > of
> > > > >> > the
> > > > >> > >> documentation. I think we're still working on these - since
> you
> > > > retained
> > > > >> > >> the menu up top it should be straightforward to have a robust
> > > > >> > documentation
> > > > >> > >> dropdown.
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >> The blue you used is more of a reddish or purplish blue - the
> > > blue
> > > > used
> > > > >> > in
> > > > >> > >> the app is more of a greenish blue. I'm kind of curious what
> a
> > > > greener
> > > > >> > blue
> > > > >> > >> would look like ... did you mock one up and it looked bad? Or
> > > > maybe a
> > > > >> > more
> > > > >> > >> fundamental question, should the website evoke the theme of
> the
> > > > app? I
> > > > >> > >> don't know how I feel.
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >> Tony
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >> On Tue, Jan 6, 2015 at 11:59 AM, Joe Witt <
> [email protected]>
> > > > wrote:
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >>> I'd say the two sides of the spectrum as examples are:
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> http://kafka.apache.org/  [super minimalist]
> > > > >> > >>> http://aurora.incubator.apache.org/ [ quite fancy looking ]
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> Both in my opinion are beautifully done and make it easy to
> > get
> > > > the
> > > > >> > content
> > > > >> > >>> needed.
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> I think these (and others) provide great examples that both
> > > sides
> > > > of
> > > > >> > the
> > > > >> > >>> spectrum have merit.
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> What is most important to me is that we as a community rally
> > > > behind
> > > > >> > those
> > > > >> > >>> with the expertise and willingness to contribute in this
> > space.
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> Thanks
> > > > >> > >>> Joe
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> On Tue, Jan 6, 2015 at 11:34 AM, Joe Witt <
> [email protected]
> > >
> > > > wrote:
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> > >>> > Both are bootstrap based.  Each is an iterative
> improvement.
> > > > And we
> > > > >> > just
> > > > >> > >>> > keep iterating as folks have time, willingness, and
> > expertise
> > > > to do
> > > > >> > so.
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> > I agree that this new look does not distinguish a brand.
> > But
> > > > we're
> > > > >> > not
> > > > >> > >>> > mature enough to worry about that yet.  We just need
> enough
> > of
> > > > the
> > > > >> > right
> > > > >> > >>> > info laid out enough to help grow a community and get
> folks
> > > the
> > > > info
> > > > >> > they
> > > > >> > >>> > need.  We need it laid out in a way that multiple folks
> can
> > > > >> > contribute.
> > > > >> > >>> > Once we have a release, recruit some committers,
> demonstrate
> > > > >> > progress on
> > > > >> > >>> > the Apache Way and grow then perhaps branding becomes a
> > bigger
> > > > deal.
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> > ..this motivates me to spawn another thread about the type
> > of
> > > > >> > community
> > > > >> > >>> we
> > > > >> > >>> > want to be...
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> > Thanks
> > > > >> > >>> > Joe
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> > On Tue, Jan 6, 2015 at 11:13 AM, Adam Taft <
> > [email protected]
> > > >
> > > > >> > wrote:
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> This isn't a downvote -- I think it indeed looks good.
> But
> > > in
> > > > >> > terms of
> > > > >> > >>> >> constructive criticism...
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >> I think the mockup looks like a very generic "bootstrap"
> > > site,
> > > > >> > similar
> > > > >> > >>> to
> > > > >> > >>> >> a
> > > > >> > >>> >> million other bootstrap based sites.  I'd personally
> almost
> > > > prefer
> > > > >> > the
> > > > >> > >>> >> existing utilitarian website over a bootstrap theme,
> simply
> > > > because
> > > > >> > it
> > > > >> > >>> >> doesn't try to be anything more than what it is.
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >> This approach might be an acceptable tradeoff for the
> > > project;
> > > > >> > having
> > > > >> > >>> the
> > > > >> > >>> >> bootstrap look & feel is obviously a resource savings and
> > > > available
> > > > >> > at
> > > > >> > >>> the
> > > > >> > >>> >> right price point.  But the site mockup definitely
> doesn't
> > > > >> > distinguish
> > > > >> > >>> the
> > > > >> > >>> >> Apache NiFi "brand" in anyway. In fact the opposite, the
> > > brand
> > > > gets
> > > > >> > >>> >> watered
> > > > >> > >>> >> down with this look.
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >> As a funny side note, humorously for me, this was the
> first
> > > > thought
> > > > >> > in
> > > > >> > >>> my
> > > > >> > >>> >> head when I saw the site:
> > > > >> > http://dilbert.com/strips/comic/2010-04-01/
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >> Adam
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >> On Mon, Jan 5, 2015 at 7:39 PM, Aldrin Piri <
> > > > [email protected]>
> > > > >> > >>> wrote:
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >> > In partial fulfillment of the goals of NIFI-162, I set
> > some
> > > > time
> > > > >> > aside
> > > > >> > >>> >> to
> > > > >> > >>> >> > put together something a bit more visually appealing
> as a
> > > > face
> > > > >> > for the
> > > > >> > >>> >> > project.
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > My work can be found at:
> > > > >> > https://github.com/apiri/apache-nifi-site
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > Currently, work focused around the homepage, but
> similar
> > > > styles
> > > > >> > would
> > > > >> > >>> be
> > > > >> > >>> >> > applied to more content driven pages minus the large
> > > > headlining
> > > > >> > >>> >> sections.
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > The relevant technology colophon is provided in the
> > README
> > > on
> > > > >> > Github
> > > > >> > >>> >> but is
> > > > >> > >>> >> > primarily driven by Bootstrap, existing image resources
> > > > included
> > > > >> > with
> > > > >> > >>> >> the
> > > > >> > >>> >> > project and current site, and other "artwork" which I
> > > created
> > > > >> > myself.
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > I am neither a UX expert nor am I a renowned front end
> > > > designer,
> > > > >> > so
> > > > >> > >>> all
> > > > >> > >>> >> > input is welcome.  As a "version 1.1" I would like to
> > > adjust
> > > > the
> > > > >> > site
> > > > >> > >>> to
> > > > >> > >>> >> > converge more with the application.  Ideas for this are
> > > > inclusive
> > > > >> > of
> > > > >> > >>> >> points
> > > > >> > >>> >> > such as bringing the toolbar styling and color scheme
> > from
> > > > the
> > > > >> > >>> >> application
> > > > >> > >>> >> > to the site.
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > If this seems like a reasonable path forward and there
> is
> > > > >> > sufficient
> > > > >> > >>> >> > support, I can look at the next steps to get this
> > > integrated
> > > > with
> > > > >> > the
> > > > >> > >>> >> > project, optimization, and integration with the
> > application
> > > > >> > itself.
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > To aid in showing the intangibles that can't be seen
> from
> > > an
> > > > >> > image, I
> > > > >> > >>> >> have
> > > > >> > >>> >> > a copy of this design hosted at
> > > > >> > http://aldrinpiri.com/apache-nifi/.
> > > > >> > >>> The
> > > > >> > >>> >> > links are currently nonfunctional as they were taken
> from
> > > the
> > > > >> > current
> > > > >> > >>> >> site.
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > Thanks!
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >> > --Aldrin
> > > > >> > >>> >> >
> > > > >> > >>> >>
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>> >
> > > > >> > >>>
> > > > >> >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
>

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