Florian Effenberger wrote:
Your idea indeed sounds good to me. Although I'm no native English
speaker, I think your approach is a very good one. I'd love to get
feedback from others in the project - if no one objects, I can happily
modify the wording per your suggestion. I know there have been quite a
lot discussions on the redesign of the main page some time ago, that's
why I'd love to hear feedback from the website and marketing team
before doing any changes.
The content of the bullet lines are very valid, however the I I I I I
approach
to enumeration is not well formed.
* Learn more about OpenOffice.org
* Download OpenOffice.org
* Help with OpenOffice.org
* Do More with OpenOffice.org
* Participate in OpenOffice.org
Now what jumps out is:
* Learn
* Download
* Help
* Do More
* Participate
+ 1
That really does seem better to my eye and is more accurate and still
impelling, perhaps even more so, IMO.
Drew
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