I've used the following suggestions: - Vincent: replaced "If you need help with your wiki, you can contact our" to "If you need help with XWiki you can contact" - Guillaume: replaced "professional support" with "Professional Support"
Updated the screenshots. Votes so far: A: +0.5 (GD), +1 (Caty) B: +1 (Vincent), C: +0.5 (GD) I've voted for A, since the Community Support is presented on the same page as Professional Support. I've wanted to keep the message as short as possible, while satisfing the purpose: letting the user know he can get support. Thanks, Caty On Tue, Jun 7, 2016 at 11:23 AM, Guillaume Delhumeau < [email protected]> wrote: > +1 for A or C, with the wording "Professional Support". > > 2016-06-06 15:35 GMT+02:00 Vincent Massol <[email protected]>: > > > > > > On 06 Jun 2016, at 15:27, Vincent Massol <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > > Hi, > > > > > >> On 06 Jun 2016, at 15:19, Ecaterina Moraru (Valica) < > [email protected]> > > wrote: > > >> > > >> Hi, > > >> > > >> This is a follow up for the governance changes mail, see > > >> http://markmail.org/message/mcbcvd4i5cgoebh5 > > >> > > >> This proposal aims to add a support panel inside XWiki Enterprise: > > >> > > > http://design.xwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Proposal/HomepageSketches/HomepageSupportPanel/ > > >> > > >> There are 3 variants you can vote on: A, B and C. > > > > > > If the goal is to offer a Support Panel then I don’t the “hosting > > offers” makes sense. For pure support, I’d vote for B but I wouldn’t say > > “our” which means nothing when a user sees this in his wiki (since “our” > > points to the company/entity in which the wiki was installed). I’d say > > instead “If you need help with XWiki you can contact:”. > > > > Note that I also wrote “XWiki” instead of “your wiki” since the admin of > > the wiki would be the one to help with their wiki ;) > > > > Thanks > > -Vincent > > > > > > > > Note that another alternative is to have this as a tip for the Tip > Panel. > > > > > > If the goal is to offer a more general panel listing business offers > > then it makes sense to offer support, hosting, and even other offers. > > > > > > Thanks > > > -Vincent > > > > > >> Let me know what you think. > > >> > > >> Thanks, > > >> Caty > > _______________________________________________ > > devs mailing list > > [email protected] > > http://lists.xwiki.org/mailman/listinfo/devs > > > > > > -- > Guillaume Delhumeau ([email protected]) > Research & Development Engineer at XWiki SAS > Committer on the XWiki.org project > _______________________________________________ > devs mailing list > [email protected] > http://lists.xwiki.org/mailman/listinfo/devs > _______________________________________________ devs mailing list [email protected] http://lists.xwiki.org/mailman/listinfo/devs
