On Thu, Apr 28, 2011 at 9:50 AM, Marc Paré <m...@marcpare.com> wrote: > Hi Carl > > Le 28/04/11 11:22 AM, Carl Symons a écrit : >>> >>> "You can get support for LibreOffice from various independent forums run >>> by >>> LibreOffice and OpenOffice.org users and supporters. These forums are >>> more >>> mature and heavily trafficked and offer quality support to the >>> LibreOffice >>> project. LibreOffice does not offer an official forums board at this >>> time. >>> An official forums board is still under consideration." >>> >>> Does this sound more informative? >>> >>> Cheers >>> >>> Marc >>> >> >> Yes, now only one issue... "more mature" is comparative, but there is >> no comparison present. (Well, one is implied.) I'd change this >> sentence to: >> These forums are mature and heavily trafficked. They offer quality >> support for LibreOffice, and can be found by searching online. >> >> Carl >> > > So this newer version: > > "You can get support for LibreOffice from various independent forums run by > LibreOffice and OpenOffice.org users and supporters. These forums are mature > and heavily trafficked. They offer quality support to LibreOffice and can be > found by searching online. LibreOffice does not offer an official forums > board at this time. An official forums board is still under consideration." > > I am not quite sure what is the significance of the "and can be found by > searching online". Remember, the reader is already on the LibreOffice > website page "getting help" page.[1] I am not sure if it needs this part of > the sentence as it is ambiguous. > > Cheers > > Marc >
I'm fine if it's not there. Overly obsessive, but I'll work on getting over it B^) Carl > [1] http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/ > > > -- > Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to discuss+h...@documentfoundation.org > Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/discuss/ > All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be > deleted > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to discuss+h...@documentfoundation.org Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/discuss/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
