Re: [jQuery] Visual jQuery Magazine

[Andy Matthews]

Yehuda...   Wanted to point out a few proofreading issues.   In the Prototype article, under jQuery Workflow, first paragraph, the sentence reads   "Most jQuery methods start with the the collection of elements, " (the is shown twice).   ----------   In the interview with John, the callout box covering John's chest has a misspelling "the community self-maining...". I assume that should be self-maintaining.   -----------   In John's interview, the second full paragraph in the right hand column on page 7 has a misspelling: The run-up to jQuery 1.0 had its share of hassles, but had its rewards as well. "The major tirumph was simply getting the code out the door...". Triumph is misspelled. ----------------- John's interview ends sort of abruptly. I was fully expecting there to be more of it. You might want to consider a better closing paragraph, or use some sort of graphical element to indicate the end of the article. Many paper mags use a large square "period" to indicate a story's completion.   -----------------   The same with the jQuery Object article. It ends rather abruptly.   -----------   Other than these few minor things, the magazine was good for the first issue and had some good content. Good job Yehuda.   <!----------------//------ andy matthews web developer certified advanced coldfusion programmer ICGLink, Inc. [EMAIL PROTECTED] 615.370.1530 x737 --------------//---------> -----Original Message----- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]On Behalf Of Lewis, David Sent: Friday, September 22, 2006 3:54 PM To: jQuery Discussion. Subject: Re: [jQuery] Visual jQuery Magazine Looks great! I look forward to reading it in detail. Congratulations on your fine “first issue”.   From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: September 22, 2006 12:02 PM To: jQuery Discussion. Subject: [jQuery] Visual jQuery Magazine   The release of the first issue of the Visual jQuery Magazine is official. In our first issue, we have: an editor's note about the magazine a profile of jQuery's founder, John Resig an introduction to jQuery's basic principles an argument for jQuery's philosophy an interview with the creator of the jqMinMax plugin, Dave Cardwell a roundup of three plugins that are useful for creating rich web applications a really cool back-page ad (check it out!) Also, make sure to digg the magazine. -- Yehuda Katz Web Developer | Wycats Designs (ph)  718.877.1325

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