I think thats what you call the 5:30am proof-reading error. ;o)

Rey...

Andy Matthews wrote:
> Yehuda...
>  
> Wanted to point out a few proofreading issues.
>  
> In the Prototype article, under jQuery Workflow, first paragraph, the 
> sentence reads
>  
> "Most jQuery methods start with the the collection of elements, " (the 
> is shown twice).
>  
> ----------
>  
> In the interview with John, the callout box covering John's chest has a 
> misspelling "the community self-maining...". I assume that should be 
> self-maintaining.
>  
> -----------
>  
> In John's interview, the second full paragraph in the right hand column 
> on page 7 has a misspelling:
> 
> The run-up to jQuery 1.0 had its share of hassles, but had its rewards 
> as well. "The major tirumph was simply getting the code out the 
> door...". Triumph is misspelled.
> 
> -----------------
> 
> John's interview ends sort of abruptly. I was fully expecting there to 
> be more of it. You might want to consider a better closing paragraph, or 
> use some sort of graphical element to indicate the end of the article. 
> Many paper mags use a large square "period" to indicate a story's 
> completion.
>  
> -----------------
>  
> The same with the jQuery Object article. It ends rather abruptly.
>  
> -----------
>  
> Other than these few minor things, the magazine was good for the first 
> issue and had some good content. Good job Yehuda.
>  
> 
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>     -----Original Message-----
>     *From:* [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>     [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of *Lewis, David
>     *Sent:* Friday, September 22, 2006 3:54 PM
>     *To:* jQuery Discussion.
>     *Subject:* Re: [jQuery] Visual jQuery Magazine
> 
>     Looks great! I look forward to reading it in detail. Congratulations
>     on your fine “first issue”.
> 
>      
> 
>     ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
>     *From:* [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>     *Sent:* September 22, 2006 12:02 PM
>     *To:* jQuery Discussion.
>     *Subject:* [jQuery] Visual jQuery Magazine
> 
>      
> 
>     The release of the first issue of the Visual jQuery Magazine is
>     official.
> 
>     In our first issue, we have:
> 
>         * an editor's note about the magazine
>         * a profile of jQuery's founder, John Resig
>         * an introduction to jQuery's basic principles
>         * an argument for jQuery's philosophy
>         * an interview with the creator of the jqMinMax plugin, Dave
>           Cardwell
>         * a roundup of three plugins that are useful for creating rich
>           web applications
>         * a really cool back-page ad (check it out!) 
> 
>     Also, make sure to digg the magazine
>     <http://digg.com/programming/Visual_jQuery_Magazine_Released>.
> 
>     -- 
>     Yehuda Katz
>     Web Developer | Wycats Designs
>     (ph)  718.877.1325
> 
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