Hi Alessandro and everyone On 11/06/2013 07:27 PM, Alessandro Rubini wrote: >> Did I miss something? > > It looks very good to me, but "software" like all "*ware" is not > countable. It is a substance, like "stuff", "butter", "milk", "crap". > Use is wrong in several places of the leflet and should be > fixed accordingly.
Mh, I'm very confused now... Please find confusing sentences with "software" bellow: * Free Software gives us essential freedom that other type of software deny us. * Free Software can be used as tool. * There is an incredible number of Free Software available * However, fortunately Free Software accounts for a large proportion of those embedded software. Are those sentences ok? Sorry for the very basic question. I'll ask a native English speaker to proofread the whole leaflet and improve the wording, but I'd like to understand.. Best, Lucile
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