On 11/11/13 15:41, Lucile Falgueyrac wrote: > Are those sentences ok? Sorry for the very basic question. I'll ask a
No. > * Free Software gives us essential freedom that other type of software > deny us. Either "other type*s* of software deny us" or "other software denies us". > * Free Software can be used as tool. "as a tool" > * There is an incredible number of Free Software available "incredible amount" or "incredible number of Free Software packages" > * However, fortunately Free Software accounts for a large proportion of > those embedded software. No "those". I only commented on the grammar; however, I am inclined to believe that some of the sentences could be rephrased to sound more natural and intuitive. -- Heiki "Repentinus" Ojasild FSFE Fellowship Representative mailto:[email protected] xmpp:[email protected] http://blogs.fsfe.org/repentinus/ P.S. The e-mail is not signed as my card reader is waiting for some heat shrink to insulate the soldering job I performed on it this weekend. _______________________________________________ Discussion mailing list [email protected] https://mail.fsfeurope.org/mailman/listinfo/discussion
