On 5/5/2021 11:48 AM, Todd Herr wrote:
We would like to achieve rough consensus on this section of text by Friday, May 21.
Apologies. I've only just been able to review this text. Here's a link to suggested changes, done as a Word document with revision tracking turned on:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/qmp2t5n1g99l9wj/DMARCbis-Intro-dcrocker.docx?dl=0It might appear that the edits effect major substance changes to the Introduction, but I believe they do not; the intent was to retain the same goals for the Introduction.
Changes were driven by: * Providing better lead-in for readers with less background on the document's topic * Eliminating detail that is not need in an introduction * Minimizing PSO text, since I belive the covered domains have Domain Owners whether they are PSOs or not; hence the fact of being a PSO has minimal import in the Introduction * General wordsmithing, to tighten things up d/ -- Dave Crocker [email protected] 408.329.0791 Volunteer, Silicon Valley Chapter Information & Planning Coordinator American Red Cross [email protected]
DMARCbis-Intro-dcrocker.docx
Description: MS-Word 2007 document
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