(this time without an attachment...)
On 5/5/2021 11:48 AM, Todd Herr wrote:
We would like to achieve rough consensus on this section of text by
Friday, May 21.
Apologies. I've only just been able to review this text. Here's a link
to suggested changes, done as a Word document with revision tracking
turned on:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/qmp2t5n1g99l9wj/DMARCbis-Intro-dcrocker.docx?dl=0
(I suggest looking at the document without the revision tracks being
displayed.)
It might appear that the edits effect major substance changes to the
Introduction, but I believe they do not; the intent was to retain the
same goals for the Introduction.
Changes were driven by:
* Providing better lead-in for readers with less background on the
document's topic
* Eliminating detail that is not need in an introduction
* Minimizing PSO text, since I belive the covered domains have Domain
Owners whether they are PSOs or not; hence the fact of being a PSO
has minimal import in the Introduction
* General wordsmithing, to tighten things up
d/
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Dave Crocker
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Information & Planning Coordinator
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