Colleagues,

I mentioned in a different thread that I had an issue with the
description of the rua and ruf tags in Section 5.3., General Record Format,
specifically that I thought that they could be more consistent in their
wording.

Below please find the current text (rev -30) and my proposed replacement
text.

CURRENT TEXT:
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rua:

Addresses to which aggregate feedback is to be sent (comma-separated
plain-text list of DMARC URIs; OPTIONAL). [
I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting
<#I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting>] discusses
considerations that apply when the domain name of a URI differs from that
of the domain advertising the policy. See Section 11.6
<#external-report-addresses> for additional considerations. Any valid URI
can be specified. A Mail Receiver MUST implement support for a "mailto:";
URI, i.e., the ability to send a DMARC report via electronic mail. If the
tag is not provided, Mail Receivers MUST NOT generate aggregate feedback
reports for the domain. URIs not supported by Mail Receivers MUST be
ignored. The aggregate feedback report format is described in [
I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting <#I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting>].
<#section-5.3-4.14.1>
ruf:

Addresses to which message-specific failure information is to be reported
(comma-separated plain-text list of DMARC URIs; OPTIONAL). If present, the
Domain Owner is requesting Mail Receivers to send detailed failure reports
about messages that fail the DMARC evaluation in specific ways (see the
"fo" tag above). [I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting
<#I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting>] discusses considerations that apply
when the domain name of a URI differs from that of the domain advertising
the policy. A Mail Receiver MUST implement support for a "mailto:"; URI,
i.e., the ability to send a DMARC report via electronic mail. If the tag is
not provided, Mail Receivers MUST NOT generate failure reports for the
domain. See Section 11.6 <#external-report-addresses> for additional
considerations.
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PROPOSED REPLACEMENT TEXT:
========================= cut here ==========================
rua:

Addresses to which aggregate feedback reports are to be sent
(comma-separated plain-text list of DMARC URIs; OPTIONAL). If present, the
Domain Owner is requesting Mail Receivers to send aggregate feedback
reports about results of authentication checks performed on mail using the
domain for which the DMARC policy record is published. [
I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting
<#I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting>] discusses
considerations that apply when the domain name of a URI differs from that
of the domain advertising the policy. See Section 11.6
<#external-report-addresses> for additional considerations. Any valid URI
can be specified. A Mail Receiver MUST implement support for a "mailto:";
URI, i.e., the ability to send a DMARC report via electronic mail. If the
tag is not provided, Mail Receivers MUST NOT generate aggregate feedback
reports for the domain. URIs not supported by Mail Receivers MUST be
ignored. The aggregate feedback report format is described in [
I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting <#I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting>].
<#section-5.3-4.14.1>
ruf:

Addresses to which message-specific failure information is to be reported
(comma-separated plain-text list of DMARC URIs; OPTIONAL). If present, the
Domain Owner is requesting Mail Receivers to send detailed failure reports
about messages that fail the DMARC evaluation in specific ways (see the
"fo" tag above). [I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting
<#I-D.ietf-dmarc-aggregate-reporting>] discusses considerations that apply
when the domain name of a URI differs from that of the domain advertising
the policy. See Section 11.6 <#external-report-addresses> for additional
considerations. A Mail Receiver MUST implement support for a "mailto:"; URI,
i.e., the ability to send a DMARC report via electronic mail. If the tag is
not provided, Mail Receivers MUST NOT generate failure reports for the
domain. URIs not supported by Mail Receivers MUST be ignored. The format
for message-specific failure reporting is described in [
I-D.ietf-dmarc-failure-reporting <#I-D.ietf-dmarc-failure-reporting>].
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Discuss at your convenience, please...

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*Todd Herr * | Technical Director, Standards & Ecosystem
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