Dear co-chairs, all,
I join early adopters of the draft and agree that it should become WG document.
To the co-authors I propose to check whether all what I detected as nits/typos
really are ones:
p.3:
multihomed achitecture => multihomed architecture
using GRE as mobile tuneling => using GRE as mobile tunneling
Tunnel-2 (ober DSL) => Tunnel-2 (over DSL)
Fig.1:
Flow0=-4 => Flow-4
P.4:
Care-of-Adresse => Care-of-Address
one MAG/LMA link, i.e. IP-in-IP tunnel, tunnel can be used => one MAG/LMA link,
i.e. IP-in-IP tunnel, can be used
This document overcome => This document overcomes
p.5:
delegated mobile network prefix. => delegated mobile network prefix (DMNP).
> BTW IMHO also the acronym for MAG Multipath-Binding (MMB) should be
> introduced anywhere around Fig. 2.
p.6:
ans thus => and thus
may require the RG and the to
exchange interface metrics
=> may require the RG and the LMA/mobility anchor to
exchange interface metrics
p.7:
on a flow basis => on a per-flow basis
care-addresses => care-of addresses
p.8:
Here the parameters to be explained/defined are missing – e.g.
If-ATT
This 8-bit field identifies the Access-Technology type …
If-Label
This 8-bit field represents the interface label …
Etc.
p.9:
from the Mobile Node Identifier Option
Subtypes registry.
=> from the Mobile Node Identifier Option
Subtypes registry at
<http://www.iana.org/assignments/mobility-parameters>.
Or perhaps better: include direct reference to draft-ietf-dmm-4283mnids ??
Also I wonder whether not some more security considerations should be added
like that a new risk emerges in case not all multipath tunnels, tunnel
technologies, and used access links don’t exhibit similar high security ?
Thanks!
Best Regards
Dirk
From: dmm [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Dapeng Liu
Sent: Mittwoch, 25. November 2015 17:22
To: dmm
Subject: [DMM] Call for adoption confirmation: draft-seite-dmm-rg-multihoming-02
Hello all,
In IETF94, we initiated the call for adoption for the draft:
draft-seite-dmm-rg-multihoming-02<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-seite-dmm-rg-multihoming-02>:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-seite-dmm-rg-multihoming-02
Seems have got sufficient support during the meeting. We'd like to confirm the
call for adoption in the mailing list for 2 weeks.
Please send your opinion and comments to the list before December 9.
Thanks,
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Best Regards,
Dapeng&Jouni
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Best Regards,
Dapeng Liu
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