i think the vocal at the beginning would be better with lots more fx,
unintelligble style...
sounds a little un-harmonic...
that snare is much to weak and pshhhhy sounding, something with a sharper
sound might be better... sounds like you need some more samples... 8)
the track doesnt really go anywhere... doesnt follow the jungle track flow
of intro>drop, its not really dj friendly, but maybe its not supposed to be?
theres no real bassline?

how long have you been producing?

-----Original Message-----
From: Robert Caponi [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]]
Sent: Monday, August 26, 2002 4:22 PM
To: Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List
Subject: [dnb-prod] Feedback needed


  OK, this is a track from my 2cd album. I posted it on my webspace for a
friend who gave me the vocal sample. Anyway, I know I probably fucked up
the drums with compression, but I'm hoping this can be corrected in
mastering. Production-wise, this track is pretty typical of the album,
so any advice you could give me would be applicable to most of the other
tracks (which would mean re-recording the drum parts.) Anyway, here it
is:

  http://www.nr.infi.net/~tagutcow/ectomorpheme.mp3

  Thanks in advance for any help!


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