Greetings. Someone reading this document for the first time might not
understand where the DNS name that is being discussed in the main body
of the document was found. It is not until Section 8 ("Out of Band
Sources of Domain Name") that this is mentioned, and that feels much too
late.
The document might be much more approachable if Section 8 was moved to
immediately after Section 3, and if it was re-titled "Configuration of
the Domain Name for Verification".
--Paul Hoffman
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