On 26 Oct 2016, at 6:24, Sara Dickinson wrote:
On 23 Oct 2016, at 00:26, Paul Hoffman <[email protected]> wrote:
Greetings. Someone reading this document for the first time might not
understand where the DNS name that is being discussed in the main
body of the document was found. It is not until Section 8 ("Out of
Band Sources of Domain Name") that this is mentioned, and that feels
much too late.
The document might be much more approachable if Section 8 was moved
to immediately after Section 3, and if it was re-titled
"Configuration of the Domain Name for Verification
Hi Paul,
This is a good point. As suggested in my other email I propose
including a definition in the Terminology section of ‘authentication
domain name’. Here is what I suggest:
* Authentication domain name: A domain name that can be used to
authenticate a DNS Privacy enabling server. Sources of authentication
domain names are
discussed in Section * and Section *.
And then also moving sections 7 and 8 to immediately after section 4.
I suggest after section 4 rather than 3 because 4 is currently the
‘Discussion’. However I’m not averse to splitting the
Discussion section up as it is rather large now….
Good point. Maybe moving 7 and 8 to be after 4.1 would make sense ("here
is how you start, and here are what profiles are"). You could split
Section 4 up or make it longer; it doesn't really matter as long as you
don't go beyond three levels of heading there.
--Paul Hoffman
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