> On 23 Oct 2016, at 00:26, Paul Hoffman <[email protected]> wrote: > > Greetings. Someone reading this document for the first time might not > understand where the DNS name that is being discussed in the main body of the > document was found. It is not until Section 8 ("Out of Band Sources of Domain > Name") that this is mentioned, and that feels much too late. > > The document might be much more approachable if Section 8 was moved to > immediately after Section 3, and if it was re-titled "Configuration of the > Domain Name for Verification
Hi Paul, This is a good point. As suggested in my other email I propose including a definition in the Terminology section of ‘authentication domain name’. Here is what I suggest: * Authentication domain name: A domain name that can be used to authenticate a DNS Privacy enabling server. Sources of authentication domain names are discussed in Section * and Section *. And then also moving sections 7 and 8 to immediately after section 4. I suggest after section 4 rather than 3 because 4 is currently the ‘Discussion’. However I’m not averse to splitting the Discussion section up as it is rather large now…. Sara _______________________________________________ dns-privacy mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
