Thank Dick! > On 16 Jun 2023, at 18:33, Dick Franks <[email protected]> wrote: > > All > > I have reviewed the document which appears to be almost ready for > submission to IESG. > > > Subsection 6.1.1 uses QNAME to refer to two different entities. > The opening sentence needs to say nothing more than that the report > query is a concatenation of the listed items. > The conflicting usage is easily resolved by rewording the third item. > > 6.1.1. Constructing the Report Query > > The QNAME for the report query is constructed by concatenating the > - following elements, appending each successive element in the list to > - the right-hand side of the QNAME: > + following elements: > > * A label containing the string "_er". > > * The QTYPE that was used in the query that resulted in the extended > DNS error, presented as a decimal value, in a single DNS label. > > - * The QNAME that was used in the query that resulted in the extended > - DNS error. The QNAME may consist of multiple labels and is > - concatenated as is, i.e. in DNS wire format. > + * The list of non-null labels representing the query which is the > + subject of the DNS error report. > > * The extended DNS error, presented as a decimal value, in a single > DNS label. >
Much better, will update. Thanks for the review and implementation support! Roy > > Regards > > Dick Franks > ________________________ _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
