Oops, and I forgot to add that ID-nit tool mentions that RFC 4033 and 4035 are 
listed as references but are not used. RFC 3174 should rather be informative 
than normative.

Additionally, Tim, as the shepherd, did you check whether all authors have 
agreed to be cited as authors ? (I guess they are, but let’s write it clearly 
in the shepherd’s write-up).

Regards

-éric

From: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]>
Date: Monday, 17 February 2025 at 16:02
To: [email protected] <[email protected]>
Subject: [DNSOP] AD review of draft-ietf-dnsop-must-not-sha1-02
Dear all,

Thanks for your patience as I was on vacations when the publication of this I-D 
was requested. As the DNSOP responsible AD is also an author, I was selected as 
the acting responsible AD for this I-D. Hence, here are some comments that I 
want to be addressed (either by replying to me or by a revised I-D) before 
proceeding to the IETF Last Call.


1.      The shepherd write-up is very terse , so far so good, but does not 
include a justification for the intended status (PS is the correct one of 
course)

2.      Should this document update (in the meta-data, abstract, and 
introduction) RFCs 4034 and 5155 ? (I think so)

3.      The phrasing of the last paragraph section 2 is weird with a mix of 
MUST and MAY

4.      Section 5  "Digest Algorithms" registry, there is a Status field but no 
"Use for DNSSEC Delegation" field

5.      Section 5 s/DNS Security Algorithm Numbers registry/“DNS Security 
Algorithm Numbers” registry/ and there is no “MUST NOT” value, just “N”

Once the above points are addressed, then I will proceed with the publication 
of this important document.

Regards,

-éric

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