Jyothi.Srinath at sun.com wrote:
> IPS and Indiana Folks,
> 
> The first draft of OpenSolaris 2008.11 IPS Guide is ready for review. 
> The pdf document is available at :
> 
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/indiana/files/ips.pdf
> 
> This is a WIP book and some links may be missing or pointing to older 
> documentation. More examples and glossary terms will be added.
> 
> New information is spread throughout the book and chapters 5 and 7,  on 
> Keys and Certificates and Mirroring Repositories is completely new.
> 
> Please send me your feedback and comments by 10/28.
> 
> Thanks for taking the time to review!

In the section, "How to Delete The Command History Information" -- "pkg 
purge-history" is repeated twice, and is missing "pfexec" in front of it.

Table 3-7:
   The description for -t socket_timeout is incorrect.  It says it 
overrides pkg/threads instead of pkg/socket_timeout.

    The -s option (threads) is missing.

   When the table is continued on page 38, it is no longer "lines up" 
horizontally with the table on page 37.

Table 7-1:
   The description for the -l option of pkg history is not quite right. 
  -l does not mean "display log records", it means display history using 
long format, or put another way, display detailed history information. 
Without the -l, a summary view of history is displayed instead.  See man 
pkg.1

Cheers,
-- 
Shawn Walker

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