Hi Michele I think the visual result is very good and that all major areas of opensolaris.org have been successfully identified.
I'd like to suggest the following: - add a section for user groups and country portals under one of the pages - consider using "participate" instead of "contribute", as the former has a stronger two-way connotation - include pointer(s) to where the user can find information and download the other distributions Congrats again, it looks very good :) thanks Rafael michelle olson wrote: > Hi all, > > As part of my work on the opensolaris website project, we've drafted a > splash page and 4 landing pages to go live in May. This is a stop-gap > measure for short-term, and I could use your help to improve the > content. (Long-term, we'll do a full site audit and usability study for > new navigation). Any and all feedback is encouraged and appreciated! > Here's the draft: > > http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/splash2/ > > Thanks in advance for your time to review and feedback! I can take > comments through next Weds. > > Regards, > Michelle Olson > OpenSolaris website project leader
