michelle olson wrote:
> Hi Roland!
> 
> Thanks for your time to review, my replies inline.
> 
> Roland Mainz wrote:
>> michelle olson wrote:
>>   
>>> As part of my work on the opensolaris website project, we've drafted a
>>> splash page and 4 landing pages to go live in May. This is a stop-gap
>>> measure for short-term, and I could use your help to improve the
>>> content. (Long-term, we'll do a full site audit and usability study for
>>> new navigation). Any and all feedback is encouraged and appreciated!
>>> Here's the draft:
>>>
>>> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/website/splash2/
>>>
>>> Thanks in advance for your time to review and feedback! I can take
>>> comments through next Weds.
>>>     
>>
>> What about adding "ksh93" to "Including DTrace, Containers, ZFS and
>> more..." ? :-)
>>   
> Good suggestion, I will make this change.
>> One question about the page: Is this an image or is this a normal,
>> floating HTML layout ? Is the front page readable with a text browser
>> like "w3m" or "lynx" (which would be needed for accessiblity) ? Is the
>> content viewable on a mobile phone browser ?
>>   
> it will be a normal HTML with CSS for styles.
> 
> It will be compatible with text browser and it will render on a mobile 
> phone browser, although it won't look good (i.e. we are going to make a 
> special mobile page.)

This is my fault, but this should read we will *not* be making a special 
mobile page.

Derek

> 
> Thanks,
> Michelle
>> ----
>>
>> Bye,
>> Roland
>>
>>   
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