Hi Brian,

Thanks for working on this, very cool! Yes, we can definitely link to 
this from the docs list, where do you think it fits best? Here's my 
review feedback:

mo-1 missing closing parentheses on third bullet in section 1

mo-2 Are the last three sections duplicates?

mo-3 Can you specify the manpage(s) in first sentence of Common Flags 
section?

mo-4 could you give an example without variables that includes output? 
(just nice-to-have)

Thanks again!
Michelle

Brian Gupta wrote:
> Thanks Eric, I agree with your suggestionis and have made the 
> necessary changes. (I will also include some info on the -H option as 
> Ceri suggested.)
>
> On 7/11/07, * Eric Armstrong* <Eric.Armstrong at sun.com 
> <mailto:Eric.Armstrong at sun.com>> wrote:
>
>     Good writeup. One note:
>
>     The admonition at the end to be sure to include the final slashes
>     should be right up at the top, at the end of the Basic Syntax
>     section--and the paragraph in that section should include the
>     terminal slash on the first item, as well as the second:
>
>        The basic syntax is simple enough. Here's a generic example
>         that synchronizes the contents of a local directory
>         - dirpath/ - with a remote counterpart
>                 ^^^
>         - remotehost:/dirpath/ using rsh as the transport protocol.
>
>     Brian Gupta wrote:
>     > If people don't have any issues, do we want to link to it from
>     the docs
>     > section?
>     >
>     > On 7/11/07, *Brian Gupta* < brian.gupta at gmail.com
>     <mailto:brian.gupta at gmail.com>
>     > <mailto:brian.gupta at gmail.com <mailto:brian.gupta at gmail.com>>>
>     wrote:
>     >
>     >     http://www.genunix.org/wiki/index.php/Rsync_on_Solaris_HOWTO
>     >
>     >     Thanks,
>     >     Brian
>     >
>     >
>     >
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