On 7/11/07, michelle olson <michelle.olson at sun.com> wrote: > > Hi Brian, > > Thanks for working on this, very cool! Yes, we can definitely link to > this from the docs list, where do you think it fits best? Here's my > review feedback: > > mo-1 missing closing parentheses on third bullet in section 1
Fixed mo-2 Are the last three sections duplicates? Yes. Fixed. mo-3 Can you specify the manpage(s) in first sentence of Common Flags > section? Fixed, please verify that this is what you want. mo-4 could you give an example without variables that includes output? > (just nice-to-have) Umm this is a bit trickier. If you have it on verbose, it spits out one line per file/directory... Since the output is very straightforward, I would prefer to skip. If someone else wants to add a section for this feel free. (That's the beauty of a wiki) Thanks again! > Michelle > > Brian Gupta wrote: > > Thanks Eric, I agree with your suggestionis and have made the > > necessary changes. (I will also include some info on the -H option as > > Ceri suggested.) > > > > On 7/11/07, * Eric Armstrong* <Eric.Armstrong at sun.com > > <mailto:Eric.Armstrong at sun.com>> wrote: > > > > Good writeup. One note: > > > > The admonition at the end to be sure to include the final slashes > > should be right up at the top, at the end of the Basic Syntax > > section--and the paragraph in that section should include the > > terminal slash on the first item, as well as the second: > > > > The basic syntax is simple enough. Here's a generic example > > that synchronizes the contents of a local directory > > - dirpath/ - with a remote counterpart > > ^^^ > > - remotehost:/dirpath/ using rsh as the transport protocol. > > > > Brian Gupta wrote: > > > If people don't have any issues, do we want to link to it from > > the docs > > > section? > > > > > > On 7/11/07, *Brian Gupta* < brian.gupta at gmail.com > > <mailto:brian.gupta at gmail.com> > > > <mailto:brian.gupta at gmail.com <mailto:brian.gupta at gmail.com>>> > > wrote: > > > > > > http://www.genunix.org/wiki/index.php/Rsync_on_Solaris_HOWTO > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Brian > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > docs-discuss mailing list > > > docs-discuss at opensolaris.org <mailto:docs-discuss at > > opensolaris.org> > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > docs-discuss mailing list > > docs-discuss at opensolaris.org > -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <http://mail.opensolaris.org/pipermail/docs-discuss/attachments/20070711/0c2d776b/attachment.html>
