Some of the material (all, reworded?) in the Checking and Reviewing Your 
Document section may want to be moved here, or the two sections somehow 
otherwise consolidated. The discussion of the documentation process, for 
example, may belong in this Writer's Guide section and be dropped from the 
current C&R section.

The first sentence in this section could possibly be dropped, or reworded in a 
way that made it more generic and applicable to the OpenSolaris goals. I'm 
thinking the exact change may depend on how the first idea above is addressed.

This is just coming from looking at the first page of this chapter. The rest 
may be different, with other implications.

Rainer
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