Hi Vincent,
Thanks for the feedback, I included your comments in the staging page. I'll
wait for Filipus input and then i'll publish the new page!
Luca
Il 29 gen 2016 11:45, "Vincent Bray" <nood...@gmail.com> ha scritto:
> In this sentence:
>
> The Apache HTTP Server ("httpd") was launched in 1995, has been the most
> popular web server on the Internet since April 1996, and celebrates its
> 20th birthday as a project this February.
>
>
> .. the final part after the comma should probably be its own sentence.
> Also, "this February" is somewhat vague. I'd recommend including the year
> at least.
>
> Here: "This version is our GA release of the new generation", I'd suggest
> putting (General Availability) after the GA perhaps.
>
> Otherwise I think it's a big improvement.
>
>
> > On 29 Jan 2016, at 07:42, bugzi...@apache.org wrote:
> >
> > https://bz.apache.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=55841
> >
> > --- Comment #18 from Luca Toscano <toscano.l...@gmail.com> ---
> > All right, I updated again http://httpd.staging.apache.org, I believe
> that we
> > should have the final version now.
> >
> > Please let me know what you think!
> >
> > Luca
> >
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