In this sentence:
The Apache HTTP Server ("httpd") was launched in 1995, has been the most
popular web server on the Internet since April 1996, and celebrates its 20th
birthday as a project this February.
.. the final part after the comma should probably be its own sentence. Also,
"this February" is somewhat vague. I'd recommend including the year at least.
Here: "This version is our GA release of the new generation", I'd suggest
putting (General Availability) after the GA perhaps.
Otherwise I think it's a big improvement.
> On 29 Jan 2016, at 07:42, bugzi...@apache.org wrote:
>
> https://bz.apache.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=55841
>
> --- Comment #18 from Luca Toscano <toscano.l...@gmail.com> ---
> All right, I updated again http://httpd.staging.apache.org, I believe that we
> should have the final version now.
>
> Please let me know what you think!
>
> Luca
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