I've now been through the Preface and Chapter 1 and placed them in the Feedback folder. In the Preface I did not keep the changes Lera made to remove "you" although I did change some wording differently to removed a few. I also moved some details (about remote servers and the LO open and save dialogs) from the Preface and put them in Chapter 1 along with other information on that topic.
In Chapter 1, I added a missing bit of information (the "Styles" item on the menu bar) and corrected some other info about the menu bar commands related to the changed location of some of them. I also commented on one figure that is slightly wrong, that I did not notice last time. And I revised some text slightly to removed a lot of unnecessary "you"s. Someone else should check my work and fix the figure. I may have missed some other necessary changes, and the English may need further editing. I checked out Chapter 2 to look at tomorrow. I also updated the user guide tasks page on the wiki: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Documentation/Development/UserGuideTasks --Jean -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
