On Sat, 9 Apr 2016 18:47:25 -0700 Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote:
> I've now been through the Preface and Chapter 1 and placed them in the > Feedback folder. In the Preface I did not keep the changes Lera made > to remove "you" although I did change some wording differently to > removed a few. I also moved some details (about remote servers and the > LO open and save dialogs) from the Preface and put them in Chapter 1 > along with other information on that topic. > > In Chapter 1, I added a missing bit of information (the "Styles" item > on the menu bar) and corrected some other info about the menu bar > commands related to the changed location of some of them. I also > commented on one figure that is slightly wrong, that I did not notice > last time. And I revised some text slightly to removed a lot of > unnecessary "you"s. > > Someone else should check my work and fix the figure. I may have > missed some other necessary changes, and the English may need further > editing. > > I checked out Chapter 2 to look at tomorrow. > > I also updated the user guide tasks page on the wiki: > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Documentation/Development/UserGuideTasks > > --Jean > OK, I'll look at your version of chapter 1. Someone else can do the final check of the preface as it's already been through my hands. -- H Russman -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
